Payton’s Persuasive Easy
Do you think that mom’s are special? I do because they can be interesting,they can be special in there own way,or can be embarrassing sometimes. I am going to write about those things and then if you don’t think your mom is special you will change you mind!
I think mom’s can be interesting because you might not know anything about them. I didn't know something about my mom and dad were really good friends when they were kids. Once,when I asked my grandma “how did my mom and dad meet”and she said “when they were babies they were born in the same room and when they were 3 years they used to play all day together. Then’ I asked “why did you not tell them” and she said “we told them after we meet your dad”. That is my reason why mom’s can sometimes be interesting.
Some mom’s can be special because they always work hard and never take a sick day off. Once, me was nearly sick but she did not take a sick day off. I asked her are you going to take a sick day off? Then, she said no because we need the money for Spring Break.
Every mom can be embarrassing because they tell everybody your secrets. Once, my mom told my best friend my secret and I was like “ mom why did you do that” it was nonsense. Then,after my mom left my friend said “I will not tell anyone your secret.
It is your turn to vote. Do you think they mom’s are special now. I hope you do. Tell everyone what you think!
The biggest thing that I learned was for persuasive writing you can't put I or my.
Do you think that mom’s are special? I do because they can be interesting,they can be special in there own way,or can be embarrassing sometimes. I am going to write about those things and then if you don’t think your mom is special you will change you mind!
I think mom’s can be interesting because you might not know anything about them. I didn't know something about my mom and dad were really good friends when they were kids. Once,when I asked my grandma “how did my mom and dad meet”and she said “when they were babies they were born in the same room and when they were 3 years they used to play all day together. Then’ I asked “why did you not tell them” and she said “we told them after we meet your dad”. That is my reason why mom’s can sometimes be interesting.
Some mom’s can be special because they always work hard and never take a sick day off. Once, me was nearly sick but she did not take a sick day off. I asked her are you going to take a sick day off? Then, she said no because we need the money for Spring Break.
Every mom can be embarrassing because they tell everybody your secrets. Once, my mom told my best friend my secret and I was like “ mom why did you do that” it was nonsense. Then,after my mom left my friend said “I will not tell anyone your secret.
It is your turn to vote. Do you think they mom’s are special now. I hope you do. Tell everyone what you think!
The biggest thing that I learned was for persuasive writing you can't put I or my.